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Again!?

Another cheesy crossover!? With fighting between popular characters!?! Oh my God, that's so original!!!

Seriously, though, don't make a stupid fight between Mario, Sonic, and Megaman. There are already too many of those. Here's just some things that stuck out:

1. Some background colors from sprite sheets (like Sonic has a green-like color) were not deleted from the sprite.
2. Some characters (Megaman was most noticable from the closeup) moved when they did something (i.e. blinking). Use onion skinning to compare sprites per frame; it will guide you to keep the sprite still.
3. 16 and 32-bit sprites were mixed. Keep it on one bittage or it will look weird.
4. Some custom pose sprites were actually stolen (Mario's middle finger from Randy Solem, Mario's angry spinning from Paul TerVoorde, which I could be mistaken due to the ease of making it) and some ideas were stolen (Mario flying taken from the RotMK series and Super Mario Reloaded; the breaking up of the monkey group was a blatant rip of Super Mario Reloaded; the profile shots of the character entrance was taken from the first Mario vs. Sonic), so I suggest you give credit where credit is due especially if it's from popular Newgrounds users.
5. As noted above, it was a very unoriginal idea. Try coming up with something other than crossover battles.

Hope this helps with creating your next submission.

redkkuisawsome responds:

actually i submitted this about 1 year and a half a go and i submitted it again to see what people would think of it now i worked on this movie a lil after the movie came out and then supermario reloaded came out and i couldnt believe it that he had the same idea as me but whatever i finished my movie like 3 months after when there were a few matrix flashes already mine did not stand out

XD

Roger, you're always so funny. I almost spit out the pop I was drinking at the farting part! It was just so... random! And yeah, everything you said about Sonic games is true. "OMG I gotz t3h chaos emeralds!!1!" "OMG I lost t3h chaos emeralds and eggman's got 'em"

5/5, my friend.

RogerregoRRoger responds:

Damn chaos emeralds, you would expect with fill fmv and ingame cutscnees full with dialogue, they didnt have to be depending on chaos emeralds for a plot, but noooo.

XD

Oh God, man. That was hilarious. I thought the series died and the sequal wouldn't ever be made, but IT DID! :D

Putting in Strawberry Clock made it hilarious. And I like the Met guy... XD

Can't wait for the next one.

You get my 5! :)

Eric-S responds:

Took me time and work, but it's finished!

Thanks!

This needs improvement...

Here are some suggestions:

1. Don't make Ness so big.
2. For the text box, it looks like a Paint JPEG (and probably is) so you might wanna get Photoshop to fix that...
3. Might want to make it a bit longer and much funnier.

Other than that, EarthBound rocks! And... that's all. Hope my suggestions help. ;)

FattyWhale responds:

"2. For the text box, it looks like a Paint JPEG (and probably is) so you might wanna get Photoshop to fix that..."

You've got a sharp eye ;)

You can do better

Here are some suggestions:

1. Don't make it too similar to other movies (this Flash is similar to the Sonic the Hedgehog movie Randy Solem made, but this one has no blood)
2. Don't mix sprites or bittages (like taking Sonic Advance sprites and putting them in Sonic 1... trust me, you'll get a better score if you don't mix them)
3. Make it longer. Really short Flashes were considered good on Newgrounds a few years ago...

Hope those suggestions help. ;)

jimmy5327 responds:

Thanks, i'll take all that into account.

Nice movie! But I noticed something...

Hey, Roger!

*watches Roger fall into a garbage can*

Um... nice movie. Very random!!! XD But... was the yellow hedgehog with the two spikes named "GS"? 'Cause if it is, um, he's not mine anymore... :P I have a human character. And his name is Jordan... :P

Still, this movie kicked ass! Keep this up!!! ^_^

RogerregoRRoger responds:

yellow, 2 spikes, GS? Don't remember, msot be something i quickly made up when drawing..

Any reviews with "GS" in it is my dumbass friend. Sorry.

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